Feedback
Following showing our animatic to the audience we asked for feedback.
We learnt that:
- They didn't really understand the narrative, wasn’t clear enough for them.
- The audience liked the general idea, however didn't feel like we were portraying in the best way, they thought the structure of how the narrative was presented could be better.
- They thought that we could be slightly more imaginative with how we portrayed the narrative, i.e More Flashbacks, Different Framing shots - make more interesting.
- Liked the Flashback idea of the memories, thought it helped to engage them emotionally however they suggested that more than just the memories in the park might be a good idea. One person even stated that potentially could have several shot and sharp memories of the family.
Having received this extremely constructive feedback, we now have to go back to the original storyboards and re-create them incorporating the feedback received in order to ensure that our music video appeals to the target audience, as this is initially for the video to be successful.
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